Our task is was to make a sonnet based on the Shakespearean sonnet 130 and to do it in an unconventional language you had to do it about love and since i did not do it about love i have to redo it.
First Sonnet
I want to buy a big round apple pie
But i don't have enough baking powder
I need to buy but i am very shy
My mo m said i only have half an hour
My daddies notes and work got very wet
He asked if the apple pie was ready
I told my dad that he would have to wait
I said daddy please don't be like Eddie
At night i went and ate a little piece
I grabbed a cup and served a lot of milk
And then i had a very bad decease
So i laid on the couch made out of silk
I woke up late and ate a piece of cake
I served coffee so i could be awake
Rewriting Sonnet 130
Shakespeare's Sonnet 130 is a poem about describing the one you love in unordinary or unconventional ways. Your job is to rewrite the Shakespearean sonnet in your own language.They are a couple of rules:
- It must be 14 lines
- It must contain 3 quatrains and a couplet
- It must have an abab, cdcd, efef, gg rhyme scheme
- It must have an iambic pentameter (10 syllables per line)
- It must be in your own modern language
Second Sonnet
Sonnet about the pie
Compare pie: To an elephant or something unconventional.
smell:Play dough, Gasoline, new car.
taste:Jelly beans with peanut butter.
touch:How flour and water feel when they are together.
I love you as a lion loves his pray
For me you are the king of royalty
Without your love my whole daylight is gray
Our love is nothing without loyalty
Your love is cold like the flames of hell
An your kisses are as warm as winter
I hear your voice, it's like a lovely bell
And our love runs as slow as a sprinter
Your skin is soft like a crocodile
Your hands are rough and gentle as cotton
And i love it when you look at me and smile
And your hair looks like rotten
We're ment to be together for ever
And if you love me you will be clever
